second oral presentation

TRAVEL TV:

E: Hello today in our program about cities around the world we have two reporters in London! They are Laia and Elisenda and they will tell us something about this city!
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L: Hello Elisenda! What are we going to see at first?
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E: Well, Laia is now crossing the millennium bridge designed by norman foster. And it’s really modern.
L: Yes, you know that in London there are different kinds of art and designs reflected in buildings!
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E: thank you laia, nice theatre, isn’t it?
L: oh yes of course, it was a shame the fire of London.
E: I think that Elisenda is going to show us more about modern designers...
(REPORTERS)
L: yes, good view from the capsules
E: sure, well and now the last land mark and the most representative... Let’s go!
(REPORTERS)
E: thanks laia, and thanks elisenda, I’m sure that people will enjoy London if they go there.
L: of course! Well, that’s all for today, see you in the next programme...
E i L: bye bye!

REPORTERS in LONDON:

Hi everybody we’re in London and we are going to be your guide in some London’s most famous sights next the Thames, the river of London, and we’ll tell you some information about them. London, as you know, it’s the capital of both, England and United Kingdom. The etymology of London it’s a mystery.

TOWER BRIDGE OF LONDON
Hi, how are you today? Well the first sight to comment is the Tower Bridge of London that it was built in 1894. It is a drawbridge that permits pass high boats that they sail in the river. The bridge crosses the River Thames. It has two towers which measure 65 meters of height and 244 of length. Let’s see pictures.

MILLENIUM
Now we are on the most modern bridge of London and it also crosses the Thames that is called: Millennium is a pedestrian bridge made with steel and the design was very innovative. The south side of the bridge is near [?] the Globe Theatre. The construction began at the end of 1998 and it is done in three sections (of 81m, 144m, and 108m) with a final structure of 325m.

LONDON EYE
Since opening in March 2000 The London Eye has become an iconic landmark and a symbol of modern Britain. The wheel design was used as a metaphor for the end of the 20th century, and time turning into the new millennium. Passengers in the London Eye's 32 capsules can see up to 40 kilometers in all directions.

BIG BEN
It’s the most representative icon of London known around the world. This year it’s the 150th birthday. We call BIG BEN the tower with the clock but really Big Ben is the nickname of the bell of the clock. The hour hand is 2.7 meters long and the minute hand is 4.3 meters long, but the tower measures 81 meters height.

TOMORROW MORE...

PARLIMENT
We will talk about the hauses of Parliament, that as a political institution, has developed over hundreds of years. The modern Houses of Parliament have resisted accidents and attacks.

RAVENS

There are ravens around the tower of London there are there because many year ago there was a lot of peope dead there, and the ravens went to eat them. It's a legend that if the ravens escape, the Tower of London will crumble in a disaster. But really It is because it's a tourist atracction. They cut their wings because they don't escape.

BEEFETERS

Befeeters tell the history of the Tower of London,they are a ceremonial guardians of it.
Their real name is The Yeomen Warders of Her Majesty's Royal Palace and Fortress the Tower of London.
the name become from Beef (PLUS) eater means "someone who eats beef". Many years ago they where payed with a rations of beef from the King's table sometimes.
Tomorrow we have preparated an interview with one of them and a little guide around tower of london and he will tell us the history of the tower.

Then, don’t forget to see that tomorrow!

personal observation about my 2nd oral presentation

Presentation:
My 2nd oral presentation with Laia of this term has been about landmarks of London near the river Thames, London's river. As Laia has said in her opinion, it has been funny because we had been able to recorder our oral presentation as a reportage in London, because we have explained someplaces in front of them.
Also, whe have done it ilke a TV programme, (Travel TV) a programme about places to visit in this case London. Laia and me are the presenters and also the reporters and it seems that we are communicated by television connexion. The reporters are in London, and we stay here talking with them. (with us..)
We have mixtured it with Movie Maker like a video to show it in class. Also, we have put pictures from places that we talk about because in the videos recordered there aren't many minutes dedicated to show the landmarks.

Body language and eye contact:
I think that is more relaxed do it in other place while you are recordering yourself because it's not the same presion that in class. It has been a different experience, nicer I think. I think that I express with my body and with my face expression and that I don't leave the eye contact with the cámera because I felt calm and happy and I think that is important to do a good explanation.


Structure:
I think that we have structured good our oral presentation because we did an introduction at first, and after we did the explanations of the places that we chose with the essential information. Also, we have structured it in the same order that places are next to the river if you walk around there from Tower Bridge until Big Ben. And at the end, we have introduced the explanations of the presenters to do the oral like a documentary.

Content:
We have learnt with the information that we researched at first and I thinkt that people has learnt it too because it's a new importamtion about the places that we talk about. Like the metaphora of the London Eye that wants to represent the change of the new millenium (XX to XXI) or the name of designers. I would belive that everbody has learnt something new about London like Laia and me.

Language:
I think that we've used known vocabulary but we had to check some words and sentences to make the oral vocabulary richer or more varied like pedestrian, landmark, drawbridge... and we have used relative pronouns to connect sentences. I think that we have used a understandable and comprehensible language.

Pronunciation & Intonation:
I know that my pronunciation isn't quite perfect but in this oral presentation, maybe because I was very relaxed, I have improve my intonation and pronunciation and it is reflected in the fluidity of my words. A problem in this oral is the noise of the city (cars, buses, people, the rain of the last day...) I think that my voice is more sound that Laia's one maybe because I shouted more or because I was closer to the camera. I think that I talk a quick but also I think that my explanation is comprehensible… but the one think that I'm sure that I have improve is my intonation and and the ability to hold attention with gestures, intonations, ties ... It's a question to improve all the skills that we can.

Self-Evaluation:
In general I think that is is a good oral presentation maybe because it is "in live" in the same place of the landmark that we are explaning, and because we could repeat the times that we needed since get the best and nice try. But always it is difficult to put a mark to oneself but I think that it hasn't been a bad oral, contrary, this oral works well, it's suitable. Maybe to get an eight and a half but I think that this is to wish too.